Fallen World - Hope and Corruption

hi love it so far. found a very minor error where the mace's description is for the short sword

Finally gave this a re run and gotta say, the shift from goblins to apes was an interesting move.

Naked builds still work but it's an improvement from the last time I played over all.

Hey! So I've been trying to play this for probably half an hour at this point and it seems that sometimes the options on the bottom left just...don't show up?

I noticed it when I tried the tutorial but wanted to check the rest of the game and it kept happening throughout, to the point I can't progress past certain parts, I'm using firefox to play

Good update! The main bug that occurs is that statuses like kneeling and restrained seemingly do not effect attack availability. 

It's pretty good, so far, coming along awesome too! but there's an issue with some quests, such as the troll cave not loading enemies or the illegal fight club not loading enemies either.

and on a side note: reading through comments, i have noticed references to a previous version of this but can't seem to find it anywhere.

So been watching this title since the Twine (?) version, thought I would drop a few inputs on it.

So, comparisons.

Pros from the .2A version:

- Customizing the character, height, hair, bust and hip size.

- A functional loss state, you get knocked up and live out your days with said monster or bloke.

- It was a simulation; you were some bloke that was playing a lass.

-Cancelling the enemies move was a solid idea.

Cons from 0.2A version:

- Companion wasn't of much value tactically, but a bad end for her would've been aces.

- Customization options were cosmetic. One suggestion I would've had was each would add a small modifier. EX: Large bust and wide hips would be a hard mode, a +5 to fertility each. Could've worked with the .2B version, what with it being a simulation.

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Unity:

Pros:

-Visually speaking, the architecture fits what I assume could be a medieval theme. Nice touch with the hex grid pattern. Almost feels like a lewd mod for Civ.

-Instead of a sim, the character feels like a part of the world. Prefer the VR sim aspect of the prior version though.

Cons/potential bugs.

- Not sure if a bug or an oversight, but once you push a monster out of you, monsters both in that instance and future instances can't penetrate, even when wet. Neutralizes the danger in future encounters. (no armor run hype)

- IIRC, in version .14 there was a functional end state of your character getting knocked up if the 40% succeeded. Simple, but effective. Would like if that made a return.

-Wasn't too keen on the 40% being nerfed to 30%, minor issue.

-Minor issue, can't save scum in this version, which was possible in the previous version.

-In the goblin quests, the kitten doesn't leave your inventory after turning in.

-Mimic combat fails to trigger.

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Suggestions:

Character customization.

Hair, bust, height and hip size. (with minor bonuses and malus would be nice..)

An end state, with a You are bred screen. (for a giggle if nothing else)

-Add utility to the church. Remove debuffs, or later, corrupt it with enough corruption.

-Increased chance of game over with each subsequent insemination. Say, a +10 to each time.

An interesting little distraction, curious as to how this will pan out.

is there any way of playing the text based version again or has that been completely deleted. I do love the new format but its just a preference of mine

1. Combat log much improved, thanks!

1. gold doesn't update
2. energy doesn't update
3. description of weapon tags would be useful (esp. holy and flaming)
4. As of .41, Grobnar's cave is broken - no combat when you explore

1. Energy doesn't update - it says 10 no matter what
2. "Your foe has a 40% chance of breeding you, ending your career as his slave" message seems to break things. I can't act (no actions shown), block their actions (nothing happens on click) or advance the round (no button)
3. Icon helps show where you are, but still unclear where you can go
4. Multiline enemy names overflow the bubble, leaving hard-to-read black on gray
   
5. Combat log:
   1. should retain more events
   2. should specify enemy for all actions (currently, only shown for misses)
   3. should show damage
6. "The monster has a 30 chance of cumming inside your Pussy..."
   1. 30%
   2. "pussy"
   3. useful if the result started with "..."
7. If you finish exploring while doing the topless quest, there seems to be no way to turn it in
8. Current gold is not shown
9. Equipped weapon should be shown in inventory the way equipped clothing is
10. You have to leave and reenter guild to get new quests after turning one in
    
11. Corrupt official "collect the evidence and leave" arrow is mostly obscured and not eye-catching
12. Needs a Start Over button (instead of just refreshing the page)

1) 40% to breed seems too high. It is ALWAYS a success on his count. Would be nice if it went down to like 10% so there is a chance of him NOT succeeding.

2) Won't fuck anything but pussy. Would be nice if they would fuck her other parts. (Ass, tits, mouth, hands, feet, etc)

3) If you have an inkling of exhibitionism, the bar dude who pays you 200 to go topless should be able to ask you to go full naked. Or something along that line where he asks you to go full nude. Maybe he asks you to go topless and you have the option of going full nude.

4) When you get to the center (topless or naked) and things start to get heated, you should have the option of either backing out or letting it continue.

5) Maybe bring back some features of the old game? Idk if it's just me, but the old version seems a bit . . . fuller?

6? No ability to save and load?

7) You should have the option of WILLINGLY doing things. (Such as sucking)

8) when you go to the fight arena, the option of "participating" has a problem of not giving you the clothing options.

Cool to see the game in a new form!

Some initial comments:

General Interface

1. Menu font is a bit hard to read (especially for inventory sidebar and status scrollover)
   
2. "0" looks more like "o" (not even "O")

Navigation

1. It's unclear where you are in the city - maybe highlight the current location?
2. Unclear where you can go

Combat

1. Multiline enemy names overflow the bubble, leaving hard-to-read black on gray
   
2. Combat actions
   1. Go from white to a green/red toggle, implying you've done something irreversible
   2. Your actions clump together making unclear which enemy you are attacking
   3. Longer enemy actions text doesn't scale well
3. Action points aren't visibly counted
4. Your combat rolls appear behind enemy names (and I'd like to see them in the log, too)
5. Enemy combat rolls
   1. almost invisible
   2. I'd like to see them in the log
   3. Don't seem ordered consistently with actions
6. Enemy action result message text is messed up - it's cut out where the action boxes are
7. Dominate: "leaving you feel[ing] a little shaken"
8. non-zero Current Submission score drops down a little below where it should be
9. Log doesn't record defeating an enemy
10. Pronouns need work
11. Equipment status should be visible outside inventory
12. "You are no longer topless" "you are no longer bottomless" appears after "You are now completely naked" in log when fully stripped. If possible, they should be suppressed completely in this case

Encounters

1. Corrupt Official
   1. After defeating official and one bandit, the other stripped, pinned, and fingered. If I don't act, they seem happy to continue fingering to orgasm till eternity

Hiya, I'm not sure if you knew this already, but after playing for a while the situation summaries just stopped showing up for any and all battles, even the one with granny, it's not a huge different in gameplay but it is pretty annoying.

Can we look forward to some new updates soon?
I like this game a lot and I would like to come back to it when it offers something new.

Start new fight after lose:

"Your legs are open, and you have a monstrous phallus buried deep inside you, sawing back and forth. You groan, the long sound turning into a desperate moan of pleasure as the monsters drive your body over the edge, forcing pleasure on you until you start shaking, your hips bucking involuntarily as the orgasm takes over. You're naked, and even though you're supposed to be fighting them, you're also here so they can look at you. You feel a shiver of pleasure as you think about fulfilling your role as a monster fantasy. Your slutty nature ensures your body never stops feeling somewhat sensitive and good. You are no longer capable of feeling this confident and independent. You feel your resolve melt slightly, returning to your now natural state of baseline submissiveness. You start to lose the feeling of confidence you had, no longer certain that you are superior to these enemies. They are so aggressive and confident... You're naked, and even though you're supposed to be fighting them, you're also here so they can look at you. You feel a shiver of pleasure as you think about fulfilling your role as a monster fantasy.

Situation Summary
None of your armour protection remains - making you more vulnerable to a host of lewd actions from the monsters."

v0.2a bugs;

1. Grobnak quest. groped by slavemaster: "Error: <<set>>: bad evaluation: Unexpected identifier<<set $desctext = (["The goblin slavemaster strokes at your body appreciatively, assessing how much it might fetch him when you are properly trained. The confidence and professional nature of his touch can't help but remind you of his plans for you, and you grow a little more submissive under his hands."]) <<set $submission++>>"
   1. CONDITIONS
      flaming weapon
      held
      naked
      prone
      shaken
      stubborn
      submissive
      Permanent Conditions
      companion
      dawning realisation

It is impossible stop being fucked by Grobnash (because he is too big) or it is bug?

I have crused collar

Start of fight - "You're naked, and even though you're supposed to be fighting them, you're also here so they can look at you."

One banality:

Hair is not choosen.

This is Maras spell, or bug?

So when u clear the Rat's Nest every game over u get is Hamtier's even though i am losing to goblins and stuff.

Indecent Lace is broken as soon as I get it.

(replaces broken shirt)

If I start new fight after defeet, all temporary conditions is still with me.

A lot of submissiveness xD

xD

Click on dagger doesn't work.

"undefined" - it is OK?

begining of combat after Mara cast spell

v0.2 bugs:

1. "Having drawn in power from around herself, Mara reaches out a hand toward Drak Gibbleson. The swirling hot wind spirals in toward her hand, and then lashes out, the air glowing and distorting as she throws terrible heat directly into the monster.
   Drak Gibbleson is overwhelmed by the flames, and falls into a smoking ruin on the floor. The defeated monster drops 3 gold pieces of loot. Error: <<if>>: bad conditional expression in <<if>> clause: Cannot read property 'includes' of undefined <<if $monstertraitlist[_j].includes("parent")>> <<set _deldependants to 1>> <</if>>"
   1. seems to happen whenever Mara casts this spell
2. "Situation Summary
   Error: <<print>>: bad evaluation: Cannot read property 'combatdesc' of undefined <<print $conditiondescriptions[$conditionlist[_j]].combatdesc>>"
   1. seems related to Flaming Weapon
3. prone+restrained only gives option to escape
4. upstairs in Rat's Nest:
   1. "It's a cruel looking dagger, that sometimes does more damage than the size and weight of weapon would suggest.
      
      Take the dagger"
   2. Clicking "take the dagger" does nothing
5. in the naga fight, most of the monster descriptions are blank, only one works (it's been the third one down 2/2 times)
6. something in the naga fight (2nd time) moved me to undefined gold. 
7. Going through the Rat's Nest doesn't seem to change things as expected
   1. after first time (killing naga, got documents), I could immediately go back in
   2. after second time, Loreila still tells me to go there

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